Audience feedback of rough cut

We asked family members and class members to watch our video and write comments on what they liked and disliked about our rough cut, these were the responses...

We had a range of feedback about the time lapses in the music video, some saying they were too long and others saying they thought they were really effective, after discussion we decided that we would leave the time lapses as they are. Additionally, people said they didn't like or see the point in the fact at the end, we also came to the conclusion it defeats the target audience so as a group we came the the decision to get rid of the fact at the end in our final cut.